The introduction functions as a tool to bring the subject before the reader in an interesting manner. Regardless of the subject, it is your task to present the material in such a way that the reader is stimulated to read more. A well-written introduction "puts the readers in the right frame of mind for the rest of the essay. It establishes a context for the ideas you wish to present. With a proper context your audience will be more likely to understand your intended message" (Goldman, Hirsch 141).

For example, perhaps one of your topics asks you to choose a position on gun control laws in the United States. You might begin your paper by drawing your reader's attention to the Columbine High School shootings. Creating links between current events and your topic demonstrates to your reader that you are applying theory to life situations; the reader will also be drawn to what is new and problematic. You can then move toward a thesis statement that creates a clear position on gun control laws. The following is an example of a solid introduction.

For many, the Columbine High School shootings are a wake-up call. For those Americans who believe that violence resides only in the inner city, the Columbine shootings were shocking. Violence is not just a problem of the inner city; it is a problem indicative of a society that has lost its moral barometer. Americans no longer trust their current President, the government, nor schools to keep their children safe. As a result, many citizens are investing in firearms in order to keep their property and loved ones from harm. Unfortunately, there are no current laws that require that a person be trained to operate a gun, nor compelled to keep the firearm under lock and key. Therefore, the people of the United States need to push for legislation that will control the availability of guns, define the ways that guns can be stored, and, finally, limit those who can purchase a firearm.

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